Whew! The previous three posts are really, really, really rough drafts. I’m back at the drawing board now. The main problem is the theology; it’s fragmentary, maybe even incoherent. And David, he’s only 20 years old, while Clive, I do believe he’s more like 60. Otherwise, how does Bob get away with calling him “old man”? Nevertheless, I did accomplish one thing. Two, actually. I learned the basics of formatting a screenplay (the very rough basics) and I invented a story world. It’s got birds and people and food and stuff.

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